#4 The Barn (Continued)
He woke up with a blanket over him. It wasn't there the night before. He was wondering how it got there when he heard a voice, "Hi I'm Daisy, you looked cooled last night so i put the blanket over you. Whats your name?" said a girl rabbit of about the same age as Shmickelhimer.
"I'm Shmickelhimer, what are you doing here?" asked Shmickelhimer.
"I'm on a quest to find the majestic pool of wonders, what are you doing here?" she asked.
"Me to! My mother is really sick so I need some of that water to make her better. Why do you need to go there?" he asked her.
"I need it for myself, I suffer from a rare cancer and the water from that pool is the only cure." said Daisy.
"I'm sorry to here that............... hey maybe we could search together!" said Shmickelhimer to Daisy.
"That sounds great," said Daisy. "I think we will make great partners."
"We should start going now," suggested Shmickelhimer.
"There's just one thing though Shmickelhimer," said Daisy.
7 comments:
This story gets better and better. I thought the sign had something to do with finding the barn. That's good that he has a friend now. It sucks that she has cancer. Keep going on this story.
Wow!I agree with Dane.This is a good story.I didn't know that you wereinto that sorta thing.I also like your blog,it's interesting,and eyecatching.Awesome job!
Wow Hayden, I never knew you were such a good writer! You still probably suck at spelling. That was a really good cliff hanger. I'm definetly going to read your next one. Did you take the idea of putting a new character in from me?
This sounds like a promising partnership. Keep going!
hayden i thout that tje starry was great i hope you put anothor one up soon. how are you able to do all that typing. i know that it's probubley not a lat for you but for a slow typer like me. maybe i should try somthing like that. thanks for puting the story up.
I didn't know that you were a good writer! The story really does get better each time. It is sad that she has cancer, but it is cool that he has a friend now. If Mr. B makes us write a short fiction you should use this as your story. Nice blog, and you should continue making stories like this on your blog!
Did my suggestion give you the idea of Daisy? I like your story, but what the heck is up with the bushes? They are very strange. Maybe Daisy will be... a werebunny!?! See you later.
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