Story Time With Hayden





#4 The Barn (Continued)



Shmickelhimer paced the trail. He looked around and saw the sign. He was angry and frustrated that he couldn't find the barn so he slashed the sign with his sword. There a sound of metal hitting metal, and the sign turned. The bushes fell into the ground reveling the barn. It was just starting to get dark, so he hurried to the barn. He entered the barn and sat down. He set his things down next to some hay, where he was going to sleep. He got up and closed the door. He found a lantern and turned it on. When he looked out the window the bushes had grown back. First he laid out his things and ate some berries he had collected around the bushes. Soon he was fast asleep.

He woke up with a blanket over him. It wasn't there the night before. He was wondering how it got there when he heard a voice, "Hi I'm Daisy, you looked cooled last night so i put the blanket over you. Whats your name?" said a girl rabbit of about the same age as Shmickelhimer.

"I'm Shmickelhimer, what are you doing here?" asked Shmickelhimer.

"I'm on a quest to find the majestic pool of wonders, what are you doing here?" she asked.

"Me to! My mother is really sick so I need some of that water to make her better. Why do you need to go there?" he asked her.

"I need it for myself, I suffer from a rare cancer and the water from that pool is the only cure." said Daisy.

"I'm sorry to here that............... hey maybe we could search together!" said Shmickelhimer to Daisy.

"That sounds great," said Daisy. "I think we will make great partners."

"We should start going now," suggested Shmickelhimer.

"There's just one thing though Shmickelhimer," said Daisy.

7 comments:

Dane said...

This story gets better and better. I thought the sign had something to do with finding the barn. That's good that he has a friend now. It sucks that she has cancer. Keep going on this story.

Angie Karamanyan said...

Wow!I agree with Dane.This is a good story.I didn't know that you wereinto that sorta thing.I also like your blog,it's interesting,and eyecatching.Awesome job!

Guy's world of blogging! said...

Wow Hayden, I never knew you were such a good writer! You still probably suck at spelling. That was a really good cliff hanger. I'm definetly going to read your next one. Did you take the idea of putting a new character in from me?

Mr. Bergquist said...

This sounds like a promising partnership. Keep going!

Nash said...

hayden i thout that tje starry was great i hope you put anothor one up soon. how are you able to do all that typing. i know that it's probubley not a lat for you but for a slow typer like me. maybe i should try somthing like that. thanks for puting the story up.

Max's blog said...

I didn't know that you were a good writer! The story really does get better each time. It is sad that she has cancer, but it is cool that he has a friend now. If Mr. B makes us write a short fiction you should use this as your story. Nice blog, and you should continue making stories like this on your blog!

Brown man said...

Did my suggestion give you the idea of Daisy? I like your story, but what the heck is up with the bushes? They are very strange. Maybe Daisy will be... a werebunny!?! See you later.