#2Old foe
Shmickelhimer awoke to the sound of the waves crashing on the shore. He got some of the fire wood he had saved and started another fire. While the fire got bigger and hotter, he packed up his things. He got right to work on his sword. Pounding it and something it with a nice rock he found nearby. After he got it to a perfect shape he let it cool. While the sword was cooling he found some wild onions. He was glad to have found the delicious onions because they were filling and gave him good energy to get moving once his sword cooled.
Shmickelhimer awoke to the sound of the waves crashing on the shore. He got some of the fire wood he had saved and started another fire. While the fire got bigger and hotter, he packed up his things. He got right to work on his sword. Pounding it and something it with a nice rock he found nearby. After he got it to a perfect shape he let it cool. While the sword was cooling he found some wild onions. He was glad to have found the delicious onions because they were filling and gave him good energy to get moving once his sword cooled.
He got off to a good start, setting off at about noon. He made his way into the forest. Slashing down brush that got in his way. He found an apple tree after about five miles. He sat under it and rested as he ate one of the most tasty red apple he had ever eaten. He spotted a sparkle in a bush near him. He went over and found a circle with spikes going around it. He looked more closely a realised he was looking at a wolf trap! He looked around and realised that there were more and a sign saying "Look out for wolf." Shmickelhimer turned around to be met by the face of a huge wolf. Shmickelhimer darted back in reaction to the swipe of the wolfs claw. He lashed out his new sword. Both were standing about fifteen feet away from each other just starring. Right be for the wolf made his move Shmickelhimer realised it was Gillogops, the main bully from Shmickelhimer's school. Shmickelhimer dodged to the side just in time to be missed by Gillogops large fangs. Shmickelhimer tried to get within striking distance of Gillogops, but Gillogops was just faster than Shmickelhimer. Shmickelhimer, after a couple of minutes of dodging attacks, figured out what he needed to do. He need to lure him into a wolf trap. Shmickelhimer
ran around the area jumping over the bushes in which the wolf traps were. He just couldn't seem to get Gillogops to hit one. Shmickelhimer then caught the chain, which the wolf trap was attached to, with his foot and accidentally flung it into the air. The trap then hit Gillogops on the right front leg, tripping and causing him great pain. Shmickelhimer looked back and saw what he had done. He was amazed at his accident. He took the opportunity to turn around and jump onto the wolfs neck, piercing the blade through it. This of course instantly killed Gillogops. At first Shmickelhimer felt bad about what he had done, but the remembered all of the bad things Gillogops had done to him and his mom.
That's all for this blog entry. Keep looking for "Story Time With Hayden" to here more of the adventure of Shmickelhimer. Also feel free to ask any questions about the story, just post a comment on this blog and I'll answer it ASAP.
12 comments:
Hayden...oh my goodness boy! wat an interesting story you have going on here. very intertaning. i like the pictures. did you just get them of google or wat?i did not know you were such a good story teller, and writer for that matter! you should take a look at being a childrens book author! you would be really goooood at it!
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Angie
Good job Hayden. That was just as funny as the last one. I hope you keep writing about this. Good job.
Hayden, Story Time With Hayden
Hey, once again it was a great story and I Really liked it. Angie is right
you should really become an author you would be really good. I really liked the first one though I dont think you can that writing. So think of it as a challenge and keep on writing. I hope the next one is just as good or even better.
-Camden B
Congratulations, Hayden. You have an amazing talent for writing. The abilities of the rabbit are amazing! One question, though; why did the wolf want to kill him? And why was the wolf far from home?
Hey Hayden, it is Guy. I really like your series of Shmikleheimer. You keep going dude. One question, i am wondering if you could make the stories a little longer. I think that that would be awesome.
nice story I fell a little bad for the dude. but the fact that he made a sword is awesome. it sucks for gilligops though. can't wait for the next one.
Hey Hayden, that is a really good story. You are really good at writting random storys. My favorite part of the story was when he made the sword. I agree with Angie, you should get this published. I can't wiat till your next story.
That is a pretty commie blog you have. It sounds almost like my bus rides in the afternoon except shorter. I also like your picture of the dude burning rubber on he wheel chair. I'm looking forward to making a game where the commies are good and the UN is bad. Please comment on my blog.
Wow Hayden that is a very interesting story. I will be waiting anxiously for the next installment. What was Shmicklehimer making his sword out of though? Any ways it was a very good story and It was way better than i expected it to be. I really like the ending also!
Sorry about the other comment it pasted itself in. I like your rabbit, its like a ninja. I think you should add something about hijaking a UPS truck and doing drivebies alover the forest. What is his sword made of. If it is made of iron or steel he couldn't possibly form it without a blast furnace.
Sorry about the other comment it pasted itself in. I like your rabbit, its like a ninja. I think you should add something about hijaking a UPS truck and doing drivebies alover the forest. What is his sword made of. If it is made of iron or steel he couldn't possibly form it without a blast furnace.
Nice pictures, but where did you find them? I think that your story's are funny and entertaining. That is by far the coolest story about bunnys that I have ever read. I never had heard, read, or even thought about a bunny killing a wolf. Nice blog, and I look forward to so more storys!!!
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