Story Time With Hayden

#1
Shmickelhimer
Once upon a time, there was a courageous rabbit. He lived with his ill mother in a small forest. One day the rabbit, whose name was Shmickelhimer, went to go get the water from the majestic pool of wonders. The water that came from this pool cured any illness, he needed this water for his dying mom. Shmickelhimer started his journey in late summer. He set off on the long quest with only a small pack and water bottle. He walked down the thistle covered walkway waving farewell to his mother, starting his quest.
The first night he set camp at an old war base. There were cement buildings half coming out of a hill, on the other side of which was an ocean. The hill was protecting the cement buildings from any water based attack. The rabbit was to afraid to search through the buildings, so he decided he would stay outside for the night.
The next morning Shmickelhimer searched for any weaponry that could aid him on his monstrous quest. He found only a sharp, and rusty, metal pole. The pole, which was about three feet long, could be fashioned into a very useful sword. To make it he needed to find a smooth surface, a pounding tool, and a fire. He figured he better get some firewood from the forest before it got too dark. Shmickelhimer went out into the forest to fetch the fire wood. He found a good spot of dry would after about five minutes of searching. Shmickelhimer also stumbled upon a nice patch of juicy blueberries on his way back, he was relieved to be eating such a delicious treat. Once back to wear he set up camp he ate some of the berries he had picked, then started a fire. It was dawn by the time Shmickelhimer started work on his sword. He fell asleep, about half way done with his sword, to the sound of the crackling fire.


That's all for this blog entry. Keep looking for "Story Time With Hayden" to here more of the adventure of Shmickelhimer. Also feel free to ask any questions about the story, just post a comment on this blog and I'll answer it ASAP.

11 comments:

Dane said...

That was a good start to the story. It was funny.I can't wait to see how he finishes the sword. I also like the picture of doctor Evil.

Guy's world of blogging! said...

Thank you Hayden for that fantastic story. I can't wait till i see the next story of Shmiklehiemer.... if that's how you spell his name. I have a question. What is the name of Shmiklehiemer's mom? Also, will he find any friends in his other adventures? if so please comment on to my blog at https://jo-jolovestuna.blogspot.com

Mitchell Hughes said...

Great story Hayden. I have never read a story like this before. I cant wait to read the next part of the story. I want to know what happens to the rabbit. You are a good story writer.

Anonymous said...

Hayden, Story time with Hayden.
Hey that was an awesome start to your story i hope it ends with some action. There should be some other rabbits in the story to like maybe one could be a gangster. Anyways great story I really hope you go with this idea for a while.Have Fun!
-camden

Wesley Thorsen said...

I really like your story! I can't wait until you write more. The army base you described reminded me of fort casey. I was also wondering if Shmickelhimer fell asleep while he was melting the metal for the sword. If he did I would imagine that it would be very dangerous.

Adam Baesler said...

Excellent story Hayden it was very interesting. I can't wait to see the next part #2. My favorite part was when he found the blueberries. I hope that number 2 is as good as number 1. Nice job on your blog, good luck on part 2.

Adam

Chase said...

Really cool story! I cant wait to read more! I cant wait to have him finish his sword! Good job!

River said...

That is a very good beginning of a story. I cant wait till the next
part. I hope he gets the water for his mom. I also think he should fight another rabbit. I will be waiting!

Brown man said...

Great job Hayden! It's definitly improved since the rough draft.
Very intertaining and good. How did you come up with the name?
You could be an author!

Bo

Anonymous said...

HI this is stryder. where did you get the name shmickelhimer??? wow old warbase huh? thats an awesome story also although it sounds strangely familiar to camdens "laugh out loud."
thats pretty amazing and i cant wait to read the next one. really awesome work person.

Anonymous said...

Shmiklehiemer is awesome. Sweet story. Hope you right a lot more about him and his search for the water! Nice writing to! Have fun.

Walker